Ok what would you rate this and if you see any problems what would you fix?

k if i was you i would take out enemy controller (your choice) i have that card 2 but i don't use it that much so i got it out of my deck...and also book of moons (same thing i got it out of my deck)...my deck right now has 25 monsters and 15 trap/magic cards and it works really good so your choice... hope this helps you